Why the second edition of Bhagavad-gita As It Is? How does it differ from the first? Here Jayadvaita Swami, who assisted in publishing the first edition and served as English editor for the second, presents and discusses some of the more interesting and instructive revisions in the book.
Here you’ll find revised passages side by side with the versions from the original manuscript. These examples are taken from the booklet Responsible Publishing, which further discusses the editing of Srila Prabhupada’s books.
In the right-hand column, you’ll usually see the heading “original manuscripts.” Get an explanation of what the original manuscripts are.
Here’s a key to what is shown by different kinds of type:
Apart from the examples shown below, you’ll find many more in Gita Revisions Explained, Part 2. And now there’s also Gita Revisions Explained, Part 3.
And for a still more thorough discussion, see the booklet Responsible Publishing [PDF, 224KB].
Click on any line to see the revision and discussion.
| Introduction: Srila Prabhupada’s conclusion | |
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Listen to Srila Prabhupada speaking this passage [MP3, 2.9MB]. |
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[Old edition: page 27. New: page 31] . . . In conclusion, Bhagavad-gita is a transcendental literature which one should read very carefully.
Gita-sastram idam punyam yah pathet prayatah puman: if one properly follows the instructions of Bhagavad-gita, one can be freed from all the miseries and anxieties of life. Bhaya-sokadi-varjitah. One will be freed from all fears in this life, and one’s next life will be spiritual. (Gita-mahatmya 1) |
Therefore, the conclusion is that Bhagavad-gita is a transcendental literature which one should read very carefully. [The Gita verse in the old edition was not spoken here by Srila Prabhupada.] Gita-sastram idam punyam yah pathet prayatah puman. And the result will be, if he properly follows the instructions, then he can be freed from all miseries of life, all anxieties of life. Bhaya-sokadi-vivarjitah-- all fears of life, in this life, as well as he’ll get a spiritual life in the next life. |
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There is also a further advantage:
“If one reads Bhagavad-gita very sincerely and
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gitadhyayana-silasya Another advantage is that if one reads Bhagavad-gita very sincerely and with all seriousness, then by the grace of the Lord the reactions of his past misdeeds will not act upon him. The Lord says very loudly in the Bhagavad-gita, in the last portion, aham tvam sarva-papebhyo moksayisyami ma sucah. The Lord takes the responsibility. One who surrenders unto the Lord, He takes the responsibility to indemnify from all reactions of sins. |
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One cleanses oneself daily by taking bath in the water, but one who takes once bath in the sacred Ganges water of Bhagavad-gita, his the dirty material life is altogether vanquished. |
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Because Bhagavad-gita is spoken by the Supreme Personality of Godhead, one need not read any other Vedic literature. One need only attentively and regularly hear and read Bhagavad-gita. In the present age, |
Because Bhagavad-gita is spoken by the Supreme Personality of Godhead, therefore people should. . . people may not read all other Vedic literatures. Simply if he attentively and regularly reads and hears Bhagavad-gita. . . Gita su-gita kartavya. And one should adopt this means, by all means. Gita su-gita kartavya kim anyaih sastra-vistaraih. Because at the present age people are embarrassed with so many things that it is hardly possible to divert the attention in all the Vedic literatures, this one literature will do, because it is the essence of all Vedic literature, and especially spoken by the Supreme Personality of Godhead. |
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As it is said that one who drinks the water of the Ganges he also gets salvation, then what to speak of Bhagavad-gita? Bhagavad-gita is the nectar in the whole Mahabharata, and spoken by Visnu. Lord Krsna is the original Visnu. Visnu-vaktrad vinihsrtam:It is coming out of the mouth of the Supreme Personality of Godhead. Gangodakam, Ganges, is said to be emanated from the lotus feet of the Lord, and Bhagavad-gita is emanated from the mouth of the Lord. Of course, there is no difference between the mouth and the feet of the Supreme Lord. Still, from neutral position we can study that Bhagavad-gita is a more important than the Ganges water. |
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“This Gitopanisad, |
Just, this Gitopanisad is just like a cow, and the Lord is famous as cow boy, and He was milking this cow. Sarvopanisada: It is the essence of all Upanisads, and represented as the cow. And the Lord being expert cow boy, He is milking the cow. And partha vatsa: And Arjuna is just like the calf. Su-dhir bhokta: And learned scholars and pure devotees they are to take this milk. Su-dhir bhokta dugdham gitamrtam mahat. The nectar, the milk of Bhagavad-gita, is meant for learned devotees. |
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(Gita-mahatmya 7) In this present day, [end] |
Now, the world should learn from the Bhagavad-gita the lesson. Ekam sastram devaki-putra-gitam. There is one scriptures only, one common scripture, for the whole world, for the people of the whole world, and that is this Bhagavad-gita. Deva devaki-putra eva: And there is one God for the whole world-Sri Krsna. And Eko mantras tasya namani: And one hymn. Mantra: one hymn only, one prayer, or one hymn-ek: To chant His name-Hare Krsna, Hare Krsna, Krsna Krsna, Hare Hare/ Hare Rama, Hare Rama, Rama Rama, Hare Hare. eko mantras tasya namani yani And there is one work only--that is, to serve the Supreme Personality of Godhead. If one learns from the Bhagavad-gita, then the people are very much anxious to have one religion, one God, one scripture, and one business, or one activity of life. This is summarized in the Bhagavad-gita. That one God is Krsna. Krsna is not sectarian God. Krsna-from the name of Krsna. . . Krsna means-as we have explained above, Krsna means the greatest pleasure. So therefore. . . [end] |
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Clearly, the verses Srila Prabhupada quotes from the Gita-mahatmya were unfamiliar to the original editors. So, towards the beginning, when Srila Prabhupada quotes bhaya-sokadi-varjitah, the editors filled in a verse from Bhagavad-gita that includes a form of the same word bhaya, and then added the translation for it. And the other verses they simply left out. |
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| Intro: Missing evidence restored about prakrti | |
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[Old: page 7, last line. New: page 8] Lord Krsna says, mayadhyaksena prakrtih suyate sa-caracaram: “ |
Mayadhyaksena prakrtih suyate sa-caracaram: This material nature is working under My direction--mayadhyaksena, under My superintendence. |
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Throughout, the new edition restores dozens and dozens of Sanskrit quotations, large and small, that the old edition simply scratched out. |
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| Intro: Missing evidence restored about mukti | |
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[Old: page 11, middle of the second paragraph. New: page 12] In the Srimad-Bhagavatam also the definition of liberation is given. Muktir hitvanyatha-rupam svarupena vyavasthitih: |
In the Srimad-Bhagavata also the definition of liberation is said: Muktir hitva anyatha rupam svarupena avasthitih. Svarupena avasthitih. Mukti means liberation from the contaminated consciousness of this material world and to become situated in pure consciousness. |
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Another lost quotation restored. |
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| Intro: Missing evidence restored about Krsna’s energies | |
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[Old: page 13, end of the second paragraph. New: page 14] The complete whole, Personality of Godhead, has immense potencies (parasya saktir vividhaiva sruyate). |
The complete whole Personality of Godhead has immense potencies. Parasya saktir vividhaiva sruyate. |
| Intro: Missing evidence restored about the supreme destination | |
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[Old: page 15, end of the second paragraph. New: page 17] . . . and ultimately we will be able to reach the destination which is beyond this material sky (yad gatva na nivartante tad dhama paramam mama). |
. . .and ultimately we shall be able to reach the destination—yad gatva na nivartante tad dhama paramam mama. That information is given in this Bhagavad-gita, that beyond this spiritual [or, rather] material sky there is another spiritual sky. . . |
| Intro: Krsna’s energies again—more missing evidence restored | |
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[Old: page 23, 3 lines after the quoted verse. New: page 26] In the Visnu Purana (6.7.61) the total energies of the Supreme Lord
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In the Visnu Purana the total energies of the Supreme Lord have been summarized.
visnu-saktih para prokta |
| Intro: Missing evidence restored about chanting | |
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[Old: page 25, 3 lines from the top. New: page 28] Lord Caitanya also advises this. He says, kirtaniyah sada harih: |
The same thing is advised by Lord Caitanya. Kirtaniyah sada harih. Kirtaniyah sada: One should practice to chant the name of the Lord always. |
| Intro: Missing evidence restored about approaching a guru | |
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[Old: page 27, top of the page. New: page 30] This is not a very difficult process. However, one must learn it from an experienced person |
It is not very difficult process. One has to learn this process from the experienced person in this line. Tad vijnanartham sa gurum evabhigacchet. One should approach a person who is already in the practice. |
| 2.1: “the fruitive being”? | |
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[Old: page 72. New: page 74] This realization is |
this realisation is possible by working with fruitive result being situ ated on fixed up conclusion of the real self. |
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Have you ever had to explain this sentence? It’s just an editorial mistake, and it doesn’t make a damn bit of sense. What I assumed was intended: “This realization is possible by working without fruitive result, being situated on fixed-up conclusion of the real self.” A double-check with the commentary of Srila Baladeva Vidyabhusana confirmed that my assumption was correct. So that’s what the second edition says, with proper English grammar. |
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| 2.43: Caturmasya mess-up | |
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[Old: page 128. New: page 130] In the karma-kanda section of the Vedas it is said |
In the Karmakanda section of the Vedas it is said" Apama somam amrita abhuma aksayam ha vai caturmasya yajinah sukritam bhavanti " Those who per form the fourmonthly penances they become eligible for drinking the Somarasa beverages for becoming immortal and happy for ever. |
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The first edition speaks of the “four monthly penances.” What are they? It should be “four-month penances” (caturmasya). |
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| 2.56: Missing evidence restored—the sthita-dhir muni and Vasudeva | |
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[Old: page 142, 6 lines down in the purport. New: page 145] The sthita-dhir muni is always in Krsna consciousness, for he has exhausted all his business of creative speculation. He is called prasanta-nihsesa-mano- rathantara (Stotra-ratna 43), or one who has surpassed the stage of mental speculations and has come to the conclusion that Lord Sri Krsna, or Vasudeva, is everything (vasudevah sarvam iti sa mahatma su-durlabhah). |
The sthitadhir Muni is asways in Krsna consciousness after having finished all speculative business of creat ive speculation.The are called prasanta nihsesa manorathantaram or one who (xxx) supassed the stage of mental speculations and has come to the conclusion that Lord Sri Krsna or Vasudeva is everything(Vasudva sarvam it sa mahatma sudurlabha)is called the fixed in mind muni. |
| 2.63: Missing evidence restored about phalgu vairagya | |
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[Old: page 150, beginning of the purport. New: page 153] Srila Rupa Gosvami has given us this direction:
(Bhakti-rasamrta-sindhu 1.2.258) By development of Krsna consciousness . . . [5 lines after the quotation:] they do not attain to the perfect stage of renunciation. Their so-called renunciation is called phalgu, or less important. On the other hand, a person in Krsna consciousness . . . |
Srila Rupa Goswami has given us direction in this connection as follows: Prapancikataya budhya harisambandhi vastunah. Mumuksabhi parityagah phlgu vairagya kathyate. By development of Krsna consciousness. . . such persons desiring liberation from material bondage do not attain to the perfect stage of renunciation.Their so called renunciation is called Phalgu or less important.On the other hand a person in Krsna consciousness |
| 3.35: Duties and one’s psychophysical condition | |
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[Old: page 201. New: page 202] Materially, |
This prescribed duties are materially according to one’s psychopysical condition under the spell of the modes of material nature. Spiritually such duties are as ordered by spiritual master in the matter of transcendental service of Krsna. |
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How often we’ve heard devotees insist that their prescribed duties must “complement their psychophysical condition.” That may be a good idea. But look in the new book and see what Srila Prabhupada actually said. |
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| 4.26–30: Who sacrifices how? | |
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Some of themlike the unadulterated Brahmacharins,sacrifice hearing process and senses in the fire of controoing the mind and others the regulated householders sacrifice the objects of sense gratification in the fire of senses |
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Those who interested in the matter of self realisation in terms of controlling the mind and the senses do offer oblation of the senses in the fire of the co -trolled mind. |
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[28] Having accepted strict vows, some become enlightened by sacrificing their possessions, and others by performing severe austerities, by practicing the yoga of eightfold mysticism, or by studying the Vedas to advance in transcendental knowledge. |
There are others who are all taken into strict vows enlightened in the matter of sacrificing their possessions,in severe austerities,in the practice of yoga of the eightfold mysticism,in the studies of Vedas and advancement of transcendental knowledge. |
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Persons who are inclined to the procees of breath restraint to remain trance,do practice it by stopping the movement of outer breathing into the inner and inner to get out through the outer and thus at last remain in trance stopping all breathing. Some of them curtain eating process offer the out going breathing into itself as sacrifice. |
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[30] All these performers who know the meaning of sacrifice become cleansed of sinful reactions, and, having tasted the nectar of the |
So all the abovementioned different types of performers of sacrifices become cleansed from the sinful reactions and thus having tasted the nectarine of the result of such performances,all of them prepare ot go the Supreme eternal atmosphere. |
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Points Srila Prabhupada made have been restored. And the grammar has been sorted out, so now we can understand who does what. In Text 26 the restorations are obvious. In Text 27 it’s now clear that the people being described are not a subset of those in Text 26. And “vital force” was right, but that’s not the same as mere “breath.” The new edition uses Srila Prabhupada’s term from the word-for-word meanings: “life breath.” For Text 28, in the old edition the translation doesn’t match the purport: In the translation the same people sacrifice their possessions, perform austerities, and practice yoga, whereas in the purport each discipline has its own practitioners. In the new edition, translation and purport match. In Text 29 it’s now clear that those who curtail their eating are not a subset of those who control their breath. (In Sanskrit it’s unambiguous: the word used for these people is apare, “others.”) Finally, in Text 30, the old edition has it that these various practitioners all “go to the supreme eternal atmosphere.” But from the manuscript—not so fast. Srila Prabhupada says they “prepare to go.” (In the word-for-word it’s “do approach.”) The new edition puts them back where Srila Prabhupada had them—unless they’re Krsna conscious, they’re in the slow lane. |
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| 5.2: Liberation of things related to the Supreme Godhead? | |
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[Old: page 274. New: page 276] “ |
"Renunciation o things, which are related with the Supreme Personality of Godhead, as material, by persons eager to achieve liberateion, is called incomplete renunciation.". |
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Aside from being a pretty tough sentence to read, the old editing of Srila Rupa Gosvami’s verse scrambles the meaning. The verse doesn’t mean that things related to Krsna, “though they are material,” should not be renounced. The point is that because they’re related to Krsna, they’re not material at all. That’s why giving them up, as the Mayavadis do, is dry renunciation. |
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| 5.28: Pratyahara—the breathing process? | |
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[Old: page 303, middle of the page. New: page 304] One has to drive out the sense objects such as sound, touch, form, taste and smell by the pratyahara |
One has to drive out the sense objects like sound, touch, taste and smell by Pratyahar process in Yoga, and the n keep the vision of the eyes between the two eye brows, and see the tip of the nose with half closed eyes. |
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It’s the job of the editor to try to help the reader. But sometimes an editor can be too helpful.
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etad yonini bhutani sarvanity upadharaya |
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etat—these two natures; yonini—whose source of birth; bhutani—everything created; sarvani—all; iti—thus; upadharaya—know; . . . |
Etad-these two natures, Yonini-source of birth, Bhutani-everything created, Sarvani-all, Iti-thus, Upadharaya-know,. . . |
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All created beings have their source in these two natures. Of all that is material and all that is spiritual in this world, know for certain that I am both |
Of all that is material and all that is spiritual in this world, you may know for certain that I am the source. |
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For some verses we added extra words or sentences to translate Sanskrit words left untranslated in the original manuscript. This is something Srila Prabhupada, while present, approved of our doing routinely for Srimad-Bhagavatam. (See also 9.34 and 18.54.) Please note, also, that the added sentence is integral to Lord Krsna’s line of logic:
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| 7.15: What do those swine like to eat? | |
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[Old: page 383, bottom. New: page 385] The swine who eat the night soil do not care to accept sweetmeats made of sugar and ghee. |
The Swine who eats the night soil will not care to accept sweet meats made of Sugar and Ghee. |
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The old purport talks about “the swine who eat the soil.” I always thought that strange. Do hogs really eat soil? What the original text says is “the hogs who eat the night soil.” But some editor put a question mark next to “night,” and out it went. What in the world is “night soil”? Srila Prabhupada knew—it’s a polite name for that good old stuff we all know hogs love to eat. From The Random House Dictionary:
1. human excrement used as fertilizer. [1765-75] |
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| 7.15: What don’t those foolish workers hear about? | |
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[Old: page 384, top. New: page 386] Similarly, the foolish worker will untiringly continue to hear of the sense-enjoyable tidings of the flickering mundane world, but will have very little time to hear about the eternal living force that moves the material world. |
Such foolish worker will go on hearing continuously sense-enjoyable tidings of the Flickering mundane world, but will have very little time to hear about the eternal living force of the mundane world. |
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A typist, it seems, has left out a line.
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| 7.18: Slipped slip | |
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[Old: page 390. New: page 392] In the Srimad-Bhagavatam (9.4.
“The devotees are always in My heart, and I am always in the hearts of the devotees. The devotee does not know anything beyond Me, and I also cannot forget the devotee. There is a very intimate relationship between Me and the pure devotees. Pure devotees in full knowledge are never out of spiritual touch, and therefore they are very much dear to Me.” |
In the Vedic literatures (S.B. 9/4/51) the Lord syays (See Slip attached) the devotees are always in my heart and and the Lord is always in the heart of the devotees. The devotee does not know anything beyong the Lord and so also cannot separate the devotee from His mind. There is al very intimate relationship between the Lord and such pure devotees. Pure devotees in full knowlgde isare never i out ouf spiritual touch and therfore they are very much dear to the Sup. Lord. [Note: The "slip attached" has the text for the correct verse, SB 9.4.68.] |
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The Sanskrit quoted in the purport doesn’t match the English translation that follows it. Why? Because an editor supplied the wrong Sanskrit verse. (If you check in Ninth Canto, you’ll see for yourself.) The new edition has it right. As I recall, when I re-edited Bhagavad-gita As It Is I was unable to find the “slip attached” that Srila Prabhupada’s manuscript referred to. So I had to ascertain which Sanskrit verse was meant by working from Srila Prabhupada’s translation of it. Some twenty years later, on a visit to the Bhaktivedanta Archives, I had the pleasure of discovering the slip, misfiled with the manuscripts for Chapter Eight.
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| 7.25: As Kunti prays in the Isopanisad? | |
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[Old: page 400, mid page. New: page 404] In the prayers of Kunti in the Srimad-Bhagavatam (1.8.
“O my Lord, You are the maintainer of the entire universe, and devotional service to You is the highest religious principle. . . . |
The prayer of Kunti in the S.B. it is said ( ( ) ) that the Lord is covered by the curtain of (yogamaya) )and so ordinary people they cannot understand. This yogamaya curtain is also confirmed in the 15th it issaid like this ( ( ) ) In this mantra the devotee prays, O my Lord you are the maintainer of the entire universe and your devotio nal service is the highest form of religious principle. |
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A tired typist or sleepy English editor may have helped screw this one up. The prayer the old edition attributes to Queen Kunti was never spoken by Kunti at all. It’s from the Isopanisad! The new edition follows the original manuscript and sets things right. |
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| 8.6: The case of the missing mantra | |
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[Old: page 416, end of the purport. New: page 421] Therefore the chanting of Hare Krsna, Hare Krsna, Krsna Krsna, Hare Hare/ Hare Rama, Hare Rama, Rama Rama, Hare Hare is the best process for successfully changing one’s state of being at the end of one’s life. |
In other words the chanting of Hare Krishna. etc. is the supermost process of changing the ststae of our being at theultimate end of life. |
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When Srila Prabhupada spoke the whole maha-mantra, the typist often just typed some shortcut, like “HK etc.” The new edition restores the full mantra: Hare Krsna, Hare Krsna, Krsna Krsna, Hare Hare/ Hare Rama, Hare Rama, Rama Rama, Hare Hare. Just see how in this chapter—“Attaining the Supreme”—Srila Prabhupada repeatedly emphasizes the chanting of these 16 holy names. You’ll find similar examples in the purports to 8.13, 8.14, and 8.19. |
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| 8.11: Sat-cakra-yoga | |
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[Old: page 421. New: page 426] Lord Sri Krsna has recommended to Arjuna the practice of sat-cakra-yoga, in which one places the air of life between the eyebrows. Taking it for granted that Arjuna might not know how to practice sat-cakra-yoga, the Lord explains the process in the following verses. The Lord says that Brahman, although one without a second, . . . |
Lord Shri K. has recommended Arjuna practice of yoga (satijacaw) to put the air of life between the two eeybrows. Taking it for accpetance that Arjuna might not be knowing the process how to practice satojacaw yoga, Lord is trying to explain as far as possinble the porcess in the following words. He says that Brahama although one without second . . . |
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When our editors back in the 60’s came to a passage too hard for them to figure out, they did what was expedient—crossed it out and kept going. Sometimes it was just a few words, sometimes a sentence or a few sentences, sometimes a whole paragraph. Sometimes, while trying to prune a paragraph, they cut off valuable fruits and flowers. Sometimes they seem to have thought that Srila Prabhupada was being too heavy. Or sometimes a passage just got inadvertently left out. This purport provides an example. For others see 8.28, 11.52, 13.5, and 13.19. |
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By Dravida Dasa Brahmacari, BBT senior editor: Now, besides the original editor’s serious omission of a good piece of English text, one of the things that obviously happened here is that the typist couldn’t understand the words sat-cakra-yoga on the tape; so he typed in “satijacaw” and “satojacaw.” In 1968–69 the Sanskrit editors couldn’t check the commentated Gita Prabhupada was referring to while writing his purports, so they just crossed out the mysterious words. In 1983, however, the editors could check the original. So they restored sat-cakra-yoga, here and also in the previous purport, where, among other words, the following sentence had been omitted: “The practice of sat-cakra-yoga, involving meditation on the six cakras, is suggested here.” |
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| 8.13: Restoring that mantra again | |
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[Old: page 423, bottom. New: page 428] The impersonal sound of Krsna is om, but the sound Hare Krsna contains om. |
The shortcut name of K. is Om, but one who always chants Hare Krishna etc ther is no difference between OMKAR . Rather it is claer ly recommended frot his age so any person who qiuts this body at the end of this life , cahnianting H are Krishna etc., certainly he reaches the sperital planets and enterins any one of them them accoroding to his mode of practice. |
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“Hare Krishna etc.” is clearly the typist’s shortcut for “Hare Krishna, Hare Krishna, Krishna Krishna, Hare Hare/ Hare Rama, Hare Rama, Rama Rama, Hare Hare.” |
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| 8.14: Restoring that mantra yet again | |
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[Old: page 425, end of the purport. New: page 430] This is the great blessing of the Krsna conscious process of chanting the maha-mantra—Hare Krsna, Hare Krsna, Krsna Krsna, Hare Hare/ Hare Rama, Hare Rama, Rama Rama, Hare Hare. |
This is the advantage of begining K.C. and chanting Hare Krishna etc. |
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18. avyaktat—from the unmanifest; vyaktayah—living entities; sarvah—all; prabhavanti— |
[The word meanings for Text 18 are missing.] |
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18. At the beginning of Brahma’s day, all living entities become manifest from the unmanifest state, and thereafter, when the night falls, they are merged into the unmanifest again. |
[Text 18 is missing. The translation supplied for Text 18 in the first edition is in fact a translation of Text 19.] |
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19. bhuta-gramah—the aggregate of all living entities; sah— |
[19] Ruogramma-all the aggregate, living entities, Sa-gray, eva-certainly, Oyam-death, butia-taking birth, praliate-annihilate, raptree-night, Agamee-on arrival, Avorsha-automatically, Rapta-O son of Prithee, Provovitee-manifest, Aho-during daytime, Agame-on arrival, |
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On the manifest of the Brahma’s day, all living entities, they come into being and when there is arrival of night of Braham a everything becoes annihilated. |
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In the original manuscript, Text 18 was missing. So the Sanskrit editor supplied the word-for-word portion. But the English editor thought that the translation and purport he saw for Text 19 belonged to 18. So that’s where he put them. And he put in a new translation for Text 19. So the old edition has the translation and purport for Text 19 in the wrong place, it has two translations of Text 19, and Text 18 is missing. The new edition supplies a proper translation for the missing Text 18 and puts the translation and purport for Text 19 where they belong. |
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[Old: Misplaced under 8.18, page 429. New: page 436]
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But intelligent person who take to Krsna consciousness they utilise this human form of life fully in devotional service of the Lord chainting Hare Krsna Hare Krsna Krsna Krsna Hare Hare Hare Rama Hare Rama Rama Rama Hare Hare and even in this life they transdfer themselves to the planet of Krsna and beocme eternally blissful and happy there. |
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In the old edition, the purport to which this passage belongs was misplaced under Text 18. |
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| 8.28: What words are we talking about? (idam viditva) | |
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[Old: page 439, last paragraph. New: page 445] The words idam viditva indicate that one should understand the instructions given by Sri Krsna in this chapter and the Seventh Chapter of Bhagavad-gita. One should try to understand |
Now here the word KerumIrum beditwa by understanding the instructions given to by Sri Krsna in this chapter or combined in the 7th and 8th chps. Beditwa by understanding, and how to understand? The understanding of this chapter should be attempted in the association of devotees these two chapters of Bhagavat Gita cannot be understood from the academic scholars or the mental speculators . |
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Sometimes in the Macmillan edition, when Srila Prabhupada comments on a Sanskrit word, the editors have kept the comments but edited out the word. To me, these references add immensely to the value of Srila Prabhupada’s purports. With these references we can clearly see how Srila Prabhupada’s comments directly illuminate specific words of the verse. And, again, these are not editorial whimsies—they’re Srila Prabhupada’s original words. (See also avasam in 9.8, udasinavat in 9.9, and amanitva in 13.12.) |
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| 8.28: Those middle six chapters | |
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[Old:page 439. New: page 445] Chapters |
They should be especially, the 6th 7th 8th 9th 10th 111th 12th these 6 chapters are the essence of Bhagavat Gita, There are 18 chaps. The first 6 chaps. and the last 6 chaps. are considered as covering of the middle six chaps. therefore the middle 6 chps are especially protected by the Lord . So if one is fortunate to understand Bhagavat Gita in the association of devotees these chapters are his life at once becomes glorified. and that glorified life surpasses all the above mentioned penances, sacrifices chairities and everything . All the results recommended in those activities can be achieved simply by Krsna consciousness. |
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Chapters Six through Twelve would of course be seven chapters, not six. That the six chapters kept in the middle are of special importance is a point I personally heard Srila Prabhupada speak about at 26 Second Avenue. Srila Prabhupada typically said merely “fortunate” when the standard English idiom is “fortunate enough.” “One can achieve all the results of these activities simply by Krsna consciousness” is a further comment on the word atyeti, which appears in this verse of the Gita. |
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| 8.28: From sraddha to prema | |
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[Old: page 439. New: page 445] One who has a little faith in Bhagavad-gita should |
Krsna consciousness process is one who has got a little faith in this Bhagavat Gita he should learn Bhagavat Gita from the devotee only because in the beginning of the 4th chapter it is stated clearly that Bhagavat Gita can be understood simply by the devotees, nobody can understand perfectly what is the purpose of Bhagavat Gita. |
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Therefore one should take chance of learning Bhagavt Gita from a devotee of Krsna. Not from mental speculators . This is called faith. |
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When one searches for a devotee and finally gets a devotee’s association one actually begins to study and understand Bhagavad-gita. |
Then, when he is in search of such a devotee and fortunatley gets the association of such devotee he actually begins to study and understand Bhagavat Gita. |
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By advancement of association of the devotee one is placed into the devotional service and by performance of those devotional service , all his misgivings about Krsna or God His activities, His Form, His Pastimes, His Name, everything becomes clear. |
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And after perfect clearance of these misgivings one becomes fixed up in the study . And by being fixed up in that way, he relishes the study of Bhagavat Gita and then he acquires his state of being of feeling always Krsna consciousness |
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And after this feeling of Krsna consciousness in advanced stage he becomes completely in love with Krsna and that is the highest perfectional stage of life, which makes the devotee being transfereed to the Krsna Abode in the spiritual sky, Goloka Vrindaban and then he become perpetually eternally happy . |
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Just see all that has been restored. And appreciate, especially, Srila Prabhupada’s beautiful exposition of how Krsna consciousness grows, from sraddha up to prema. |
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| 9.4: Missing evidence restored—atah sri-krsna-namadi | |
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[Old: page 451, beginning of the purport. New: page 458] The Supreme Personality of Godhead is not perceivable through the gross material senses. It is said
(Bhakti-rasamrta-sindhu 1.2.234) Lord Sri Krsna’s name, fame, pastimes, etc., cannot be understood by material senses. Only to one who is engaged in pure devotional service under proper guidance is He revealed. In the Brahma-samhita (5.38) it is stated, premanjana-cchurita-bhakti- vilocanena santah sadaiva hrdayesu vilokayanti: |
The Suprme Personality of Godhead He is not perceivable by the present material senses. It is said _________Lord Sri Krsna His Name, His Fame or His activities, Pastimes, etc. cannot be understood by the material senses. Savmurti, only one who is engaged in pure devotional service and proper guidance, tho them He becomes revealed. In the Brahma Samhita, also it is stated, that Remanderacherita one can see the Supreme Personality of Godhead, Govinda, always withing himself and outside, who has developed the transcendental loving attitude towards Him. |
| 9.4: Missing evidence restored—vistabhyaham idam krtsnam | |
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[4 or 5 lines from the end of the purport] The creation takes place by the diffusion of His different energies, and, as stated in the Bhagavad-gita, vistabhyaham idam krtsnam: He is everywhere present by His personal representation, the diffusion of His different energies. |
So the creation takes place by diffusion of His different energies, and as it is stated in the Bhagavat gita Beshtabohum Krsna. He is everywhere present by His personal presentation by diffusion of different energies. |
| 9.6: Missing evidence restored—3 quotations | |
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[Old: page 454, top of the page. New: page 461] In the Upanisads it is stated, yad-bhisa vatah pavate: “It is out of the fear of the Supreme Lord that the wind is blowing.” (Taittiriya Upanisad 2.8.1) In the |
In the Vedic literature it is stated "By the fear of the Supreme Lord that the air is blowing". The superintendance of the Supreme Personality of Godhead, the moon, the sun and other big planets they are moving. |
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In the Brahma Samhita also it is stated ______________ There is a description of the movement of the sun sun and it is stated like that: that the sun is considered to be one of the eyes of the Supreme Lord and it has got immense potency to diffuse beat and light and still it is moving under its precribed orbit by the order of the Supreme will of Govinda. |
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When Srila Prabhupada says, at the end of his purport, “So, from the Vedic literature we can find evidence. . . ,” that evidence is now on the page. The quotation from the Taittiriya Upanisad appears in Srila Baladeva Vidyabhusana’s commentary on this verse, the quotation from the Brhad-aranyaka Upanisad in his commentary on the previous one. The verse from the Brahma-samhita is obviously the right one, since Srila Prabhupada’s purport continues with a near translation. |
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| 9.7: The missing Vedic aphorism: bahu syam | |
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[Old: page 455, 4 lines from the end of the purport. New: page 462] . . . it is done by His will. Bahu syam: “Although I am one, I shall become many.” This is the Vedic aphorism (Chandogya Upanisad 6.2.3). |
Then again when there is necessity of manifesting cosmic world, then by His simple Will _____"Although I am one I shall become many" This Vedic aphorism. |
| 9.8: What’s the word? (avasam) | |
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[Old: page 456, 8 lines from the end of the purport. New: page 463] It is clearly stated here by the word avasam that the living entities have nothing to do with this process. |
and it is clearly stated here that Avashad they have nothing to by themselves. |
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What you find in the first edition in examples like this is what I have called “points without pins.” That is, the point is there, but not the word it’s meant to be pinned to, the word on which Srila Prabhupada is commenting. |
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| 9.9: Missing evidence restored, from the Brahma-samhita / Another point with no pin | |
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[Old: page 457, beginning of the purport. New: page 464] One should not think, in this connection, that the Supreme Personality of Godhead has no engagement. In His spiritual world He is always engaged. In the Brahma-samhita (5.6) it is stated, atmaramasya tasyasti prakrtya na samagamah: “He is always involved in His eternal, blissful, spiritual activities, but He has nothing to do with these material activities.” Material activities are being carried on by His different potencies. The Lord is always neutral in the material activities of the created world. This neutrality is mentioned here with the word udasina-vat. . . . |
One should not have think in this connection, that the Supreme Personality of Godhead has nothing to be engaged. In His spiritual world He is engaged always as we have several times mentioned in this explanation of Bhgavat Gita,that in the Krsna abode He is engaged in His activities. In the Brahma Samhita it is stated _________ " --he is always engaged in His eternal blissful spiritual activities. But he has nothing to do with these material activities". Material activities are being carried on by His different potencies. The Lord is always neutral in His material activities of created world. This neutrality is explained herewith _______ as if neutral. |
| 9.9: Missing evidence restored, from the Vedanta-sutra | |
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[5 or 6 lines from the end of the purport] In the Vedanta-sutra (2.1.34) it is stated, |
In the Vedanta Sutra there is a code: __________ this means that He is not situated in the differential treatment of this material world. He is transcendental to this differential treatment |
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| 9.11: What did those sages say? (Quotation restored) | |
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[Old: page 460, bottom. New: page 469] . . . Krsna is the Supreme Personality of Godhead. He is not an ordinary man, although He appeared on this earth as an ordinary human. In the Srimad-Bhagavatam, First Canto, First Chapter, when the sages headed by Saunaka inquired about the activities of Krsna
“Lord Sri Krsna, the Supreme Personality of Godhead, along with Balarama, played like a human being, and so masked He performed many superhuman acts.” (Bhag. 1.1.20) The Lord’s appearance as a man bewilders the foolish. |
. . . Krishna is the Supreme Personality of Godhead. is not an ordinary man, although He appeared on this earth as an ordinary human. In the Srimad -Bhagwatam, First Canto, First Chapter, when the questions by (sonno khadi) about the activities of Krishna who was . . . the exact text of the enquiry is like this (S.B. 1/1/11?): His appearance as a man is bewilderment for the foolish. |
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The garbled “sonno khadi” clearly must have been saunakadi—that is, “headed by Saunaka.” If you consult the First Canto of Srimad-Bhagavatam, you’ll find that here 1.1.11 is clearly the wrong verse, 1.1.20 clearly the right one. |
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| 9.11: Missing evidence restored—Krsna’s appearance like a man | |
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[Old: page 461, 6 lines down. New: page 469, middle of the page] . . . an ordinary child. As stated in the Bhagavatam (10.3.46), babhuva prakrtah sisuh: He became just like an ordinary child, an ordinary human being. Now, here again it is indicated that the Lord’s |
an ordinary child. It is stated there [in Srimad-Bhagavatam] He became just like an ordinary child, human being. Similarly here also appearing as an ordinary human being is one of the features of His transcendental body. |
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In the Eleventh Chapter also it is stated ( ?? rupi) etc. Arjuna prayed that in that form of four hands and when He was prayed by that by Arjuna then He also assumed the original form of Krishna and Arjuna said (just rupum) just after seeing this form that was just like a human being all these different features of the Supreme Lord, not certainly they are as those of an ordinary human being. |
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How do we know that the verses supplied here are the right ones? They match what Srila Prabhupada says in English, and they are all quoted by Srila Baladeva Vidyabhusana in his commentary on this verse of Bhagavad-gita. |
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| 9.12: Missing evidence restored—Go bathe in the Ganges | |
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[Old: page 463, second paragraph, 4 lines down. New: page 471]
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In the Veyat Vaishnav mantra it is clearly stated as follows: The direction is there that anyone who considers the body of Krishna as material, such persons should be driven out from all ritualsS activities of the sruti.? direction. And if anyone by chance sees their face, he should at once take bath in the Ganges to get out of infection. |
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A double-check with the commentary of Srila Baladeva Vidyabhusana confirms that the correct verse has been supplied. |
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| 9.29: The right verse (ye yatha mam prapadyante) | |
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[Old: page 482, bottom of the page. New: page 493] This also explains the words |
this is the nice explanation of the words: sti na priyah ye bhajanti anyone who surrenders unto Me, proportionately do I take care of him." |
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The Sanskrit words supplied for the second edition match what Srila Prabhupada says in English. The same words are quoted both by Srila Visvanatha Cakravarti Thakura and by Srila Baladeva Vidyabhusana in their commentaries on this verse. The quotation asti na priyah/ ye bhajanti is of course from Bhagavad-gita 9.29, the verse Srila Prabhupada is commenting on. Several times in the manuscript, it seems that the typist, facing an unfamiliar Sanskrit quotation, has filled in the one closest at hand—the Gita verse being commented on. You’ll find this again in the purport to 13.15. |
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| 9.34: “Become My devotee”! | |
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mat-manah—always thinking of Me; bhava—become; mat—My; bhaktah—devotee; namaskuru—offer obeisances; mam—unto Me; |
Manmana--always thinking of Me, Bhava--become, Mad--mine, Bhakto--devotee, Mad--my, Yaji--worshiper, Mam--unto Me, Namaskuru--offer obeisances, |
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Engage your mind always in thinking of Me, become My devotee, offer obeisances to Me and worship Me. Being completely absorbed in Me, surely you will come to Me. |
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“Become My devotee.” Should it have stayed left out? |
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| 10.4–5: Fear or fearlessness? | |
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Bhayam means that if anyone wants to be free from all fearfulness, he must get to Krishna Consciousness. That is bhayam; that is fearfulness. |
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| 10.12: The “all-pervading beauty”? | |
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arjunah uvaca—Arjuna said; param—supreme; brahma—truth; param—supreme; dhama—sustenance; pavitram—pure |
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Arjuna said: You are the Supreme Brahman, the ultimate abode, the |
Arjuna said, My dear Krishna I understand that You are the Supreme Personality of Godhead, the Ultimate, the purest and the Absolute Truth, You are person from time immemorial, transcendental, original, without being born, beautiful and the greatest. |
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There’s no “all-pervading beauty” here. Perhaps what the typist misheard was the word vibhum, which means “greatest.” |
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| 10.15: Missing evidence restored—vadanti tat tattva-vidas | |
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[Old: page 513, 4 lines from the bottom. New: page 527] It should not be received from atheistic persons. As stated in Srimad-Bhagavatam (1.2.11):
The Supreme Truth is realized in three aspects: . . . . |
it should be understood from Krishna as Arjuna understood, not by any atheistic persons. As stated in the Srimad Bhagwatam The Supreme Truth is realized in three acpects. . . |
| 10.27: A sea journey? | |
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[Old: page 525, top. New: page 539] The devotee demigods and the demons (asuras) once |
There was journey of the sea and in which the devotee demigods and the ashuras took part and there was production of nectar and poison also. |
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They once took a “sea journey”? Hardly. Our old friend Neal the typist, the college kid who walked into 26 Second Avenue and volunteered to type, simply heard things wrong. It was “churning of the sea.” But back in the old days in the storefront, no one knew the real story. So the typist transcribed it wrongly, and the editor did his best with the wrong transcription. |
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| 10.29: The planet of the trees | |
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pitrnam aryama casmi “Of departed ancestors I am Aryama,. . .” |
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[Old: page 526. New: page 540] There is also a planet of |
in the planet of the trees, that is the king whose name is Aryama, so he is the representative of Krishna. |
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A “planet of trees”? Fa-aar out! But if the Swami says so, it must be right. Sorry, boys. Srila Prabhupada never said so. It’s Neal the typist again. It’s a planet of ancestors (pitas), or pitrs (pronounced pi-trees). |
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| 10.34: The seven feminine opulences | |
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[word-for-word] smrti—memory; medha—intelligence; dhrtih— |
[word-for-word] Smirtir--memory, Medha--intelligence, Dhirtih--firmness, Ksama--patience. |
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[Translation] Among women I am fame, fortune, fine speech, memory, intelligence, |
[Translation] Amongst the women I am Giti sri and boni and memory, intelligence, firmness and excuse all. |
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[Purport (2nd paragraph)] The |
[Purport] Six kinds of opulences like fame, beauty, good speech, memory, remembrance, endurance, excuse all— these are considered sevomen. All these six kinds of opulences are considered feminine, so if one produces all of them or some of them he becomes glorious. If one is famous as a righteous man that makes a man glorious. |
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The perfect language is the Sanskrit language. Therefore this language is also very glorious. Remembrance, after learning if one can produce the result of learning that is called smirtir. Medha, memory, not only to read many books on many subject matter, but to keep them in the memory and produce them when necessary, that is also another opulence. |
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Srila Prabhupada’s word-for-word meaning for dhrtih was firmness, which I restored. In the translation I substituted steadfastness, a close synonym, out of what I suppose you could call gentility: One job of an editor is to stand guard against unintended double meanings, and “Among women I am firmness” could be wrongly taken in a coarse physical sense. It’s clear from the original manuscript that Srila Prabhupada regards the good qualities mentioned here to be qualities that anyone might have, either man or woman. “One need not read many books.” That’s true, but it’s not what Srila Prabhupada said here. I also restored the word medha. Though Srila Prabhupada, in the purport, mentions it as “memory,” I followed his word-for-word meaning, “intelligence.” (“Memory” is smrti, as Srila Prabhupada indicates both in the purport and in his word-for-word meanings.) |
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| 10.35: Already explained? | |
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[Old: page 531, bottom. New: page 545] It has already been explained by the Lord that amongst all the Vedas, He is the Sama Veda. T |
It has already been explained by the Lord that amongst all the Vedas, the Samaveda is full of nice songs played by different kinds of demigods |
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Where has the Lord “already explained” that the Sama-veda is “rich with beautiful songs”? He hasn’t. What He has said (in 10.22)—and what both Srila Visvanatha Cakravarti Thakura and Srila Baladeva Vidyabhusana begin their commentaries on the present verse by quoting—is vedanam sama-vedo ’smi, “Amongst all the Vedas, I am the Sama Veda.” The new book sets things right. |
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| 11.43: Missing evidence restored—Everyone is below Him< |